Sent - ToBae fanfic

Dong 'Taeyang' Youngbae; he was implusive -- brash and had a mouth filthier than the worst sewers on earth. Grown up without a father and losing a mother who never wanted him in the first place, he was more or less...disturbed. Anger management issues; suspension after suspension; horribly low grades with little to no care for anyone other than himself and his gang mates... Drugs, murder, theft and blood. These were only part of the surface of who was Dong Youngbae.

Not one, even the least bit concerned soul, wanted anything to do with the young man. As far as they were concerned, he was on a one-way track to an early death. At least, until one Choi Seunghyun stepped in to make things right... at least attempt to.





"What the hell is wrong with you?!" he roared, eyes hard and brows knitted in righteous anger.

"I'm trying to help you," the other returned to him calmly. But it was notable that it was a task to keep his voice in check.

"I've never freakin' asked for your goddamned help!" The younger man fumed, running his hands through his hair, just to do something with them before he actually lurched forward to strangle the living shit out of the taller man. Youngbae took a breath and tried to calm his frazzled nerves. "Since you feel the need to play hero all the damn time, why don't you go help someone else?"

"I'm playing hero quite fine with you."

Youngbae cursed under his breath and growled explosively. Abruptly, he turned heel and stalked away before things got way out of hand. He hadn't gotten very far, however, what with the large hand wrapped around his wrist.

"Dammit, you'd been at my back for the past few weeks! Why don't you piss off and leave me alone?"

"I can't do that."

Completely angered to the point of no return, the only coherent word he could think to blurt was: "Why the hell not?"

"Because," the Seunghyun sighed. "I've been assigned to you."

"Then ask for a reassignment," Youngbae wrested his hand free with a snap. "I don't fucking need you."

Nothing more was said as Seunghyun can only watch as his charge stormed away.






Meet one of my earliest fanfics: Sent; soon-to-be renamed 'Guarded.' It hasn't gotten very far but I'd like to know where you think it would go in terms of plot. I never had one for it, though the foreword was where I wanted to work my way toward. I'd just re-read what I'd written for it and I like it so far. Wonder what happened to my writing xD


So initial question again: how do you think it should continue?

Yes, the poster sucks. If I were better at drawing, I'd have drawn them the way I wanted them to look Q_Q